Dear Ms Welker ,
I have been reading Ida B by Kathrine Hannigan.
I predict that Ida B will get nicer.She was mean because
her mom had cancer and her dad sold part of her orchard
so she got really mad at them and she hated school.But her mom and dad
made her go back to school.She went to school 4 years ago.I had trouble with
the word bladdered. I asked my dad and he said it means blown up.
Ana
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- I love spaghetti and Cheese, my favorite sports are cheerleading, swimming, and volleyball. P.S I LOVE CHEESE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!and Ilove animals except the ones that hurt humans and also I hate spiders.
Ana, you have a good start to a first paragraph, but the only part you included in your second paragraph was clarifying a word. This does not meet my expectation. Please refer to the directions I gave you.
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Good job! yours was interesting. The part that says she went to school 4 years ago stands out alittle and doesn't fit in with the rest of what your saying.
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